Monday, December 21, 2009

The Grand Machine - Rough Pages PT.1

Ok folks, Decided to go ahead and start posting this and get people's views and opinions. PLEASE comment, good or ill. This is the rough cut, and edits and inks are still in the future. Here are the first five pages of The Grand Machine, written & lettered by me and drawn by the amazing Claudio Avella (seriously, if you can throw this guy some work, shoot me an email at jagorfain@gmail.com and I'll pass the word along.). I'm also available for hire too...Without further ado...

1 comment:

Byron Rempel said...

looking great so far, inks will really bring it to life. Only critique is the text box on page 3, " Lunchtime at el Sicilian Grill " could use a bit more space between the words and the box lines. Seems crowded.

looking forward to more